1. Would -> will
2. ...wants me to give her...
3. Likes->like
4. Не могу найти ошибку, вероятно все верно
5. ...asks if we have seen...
6. They have had the piano...
7. ...made me repairing...
8. I wish I could speak...
9. How long has he been living here?
10. Тоже как будто все верно
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